What about this poem?

Young man young man

He rules the world

Savior comma savior

The crowds rush to the forum

Blue-eyed surprise, he’ll deliver the world some day

Young man young man

So small

But does it make him look innocent?

We all have

A lot of growing to do

Forty years walking away from misery

Is that a prison,

Or purgatory?

These lost souls are trapped in beehives

Only a hundred good men

Walk free

Young man young man

Are you part of the fate?

Why do these things happen to us?

Spin us a yarn

End with a moral, it’s important

Every day is a lesson

That’s why wise men keep dying, isn’t it?

Young man young man

Stay away from the lies of springtime

Lovers are found in the cold

I’m not a wise man

But a few things I know

Flowers are deceptive

They feed ill expression

Slammed on canvases

Like a silent drum

Even the youngest of roses is now battered and worn

Young man young man

Stay away from the lies of springtime

And you will understand

Young man young man

Follow the road, and none of us will be saved

What about this poem?
Shallow :(

You can do better, I'm sure.
Reply:I'm not sure what you mean as "What about it?" but I'm pretty sure it's talking about Jesus, the Savior. He will deliver us (in the bible). We are lost (without Jesus). He is the fate that will deliver us. He often taught lessons and morals to people. So I'm pretty sure.



I'm just not sure about the ending. "Follow the road and none of us will be saved." I think this means that if he was like other men, sinners, we wouldn't be saved.



I would love to know you're explination of it, but I like it.
Reply:Good, what about it
Reply:Not good.
Reply:GARBAGE.